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The Romeo and Juliet is a movie about sad love story. It's based on a novel written by an Shakespear. The main characters are Romeo, played by whiting, and Juliet, played by Olivia Hussey. Romeo and Juliet born in the other house. and this houses are enemy. But they don't know first. in the party, Romeo saw Juliet and fall in love. So he told to her that i want to kiss your hand. and she allowed. and the they have married . But they know that they are forbidden love. So they tried to run away. but it's failed. and they died. I think The Romeo and Juliet is lovely movie. but it's sad story. It's teach us that love your enemy.
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