piaget’s theory is built around stages in which landmark changes take place in children’s ways of thinking.

-피아제 이론은 아동의 사고 방식에서 일어나는 변화 표시에 주변단계에 지었다??

어느정도 느낌은 오는데 문맥상 굉장히 어색하네요.. 

어순 부드럽게 맟춰주실수 있으신 능력자분 계신가요 ㅜ