Hello, everybody. Let me begin by thanking you for the time that we share together this beautiful afternoon My name is (재이름) and I'm a student attending English class. It's a great pleasure to be here to introduce my favorite artist, Eminem. He was born in Kansas. And He had lived in Kansas and Detroit. His father has passed away when he was a 5-month-old. When he was 14 he formed a Hip-Hop Group and He started performing a concert. But he was ignored because of his skin colour. in 1997,however, he got second prize in LA Rap Olympics. and When he was 20 he got married Kim But 5years later they were divorced In 2001, by releasing 'Mashall Mathers LP' he got prizes in the many Music awards like Billboard, MTV and Grammy he even shot the film in 2002 In 2003 Dr. Dre became his mentor and they released 'Detox'. and then he released many music album and he got many prizes too. In 2011 He formed a group, bad meets evil and they released album. it ranked first prize in Itunes Hip-Hop Chart and thy travel almost of western contury for a concert Now, he bacomes the best rapper ever
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