I was " so excited " when I saw that " Many of " Players were running, catching, hitting.


야구얘기인데 막 뛰고 잡고 치고 하는 많은 선수들을 볼때 되게 흥분되었다 뭐 이런 식의 내용을 영작했는데

교수님이 " ~ " 이 부분이 틀렸다고 그러시는데 왜 틀렸는지 모르겠습니다 ㅠㅠ


그리고

Also " I saw the fashion inside of the players" and "that feel so awesome. " " Let me explain what the charm of baseball is. "

이 부분에서도 뭐가 틀렸는지 모르겠어요 ㅠ 
 
한 13줄 되는 영작이었는데 틀린 부분 이것보다 많은데 ㅋㅋ 전부 다 해달라는 건 좀 아닌 것 같아서 ㅋㅋ