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1.my family live on Korea in seoul.

2.Seoul is a city very good living while being a famous tourist destination.

3.Seoul is a really beautiful city, cultural properties, many are in the spotlight as well as a tourist destination, Han River is flowing Some of the Seoul

4.However, Seoul is a big problem very densely populated by mosquitoes.

5.Initially, the temperature will be very high for the greenhouse effect, geothermal is very high for asphalt center

6.Second is the problem of carbon gas emissions.

7.This is the biggest problem of global warming, in the case of Korea, carbon emissions, has been recorded in 8 of carbon dioxide emissions in the order of the current world.

8.Why carbon dioxide emissions is large, has been taking advantage of the many on a vehicle that uses mainly the fossil fuel is a major cause

9.We, in order to deliver to future generations an environment, we must make an effort from now.

10.There are many ways to reduce the carbon dioxide, there are several ways how we should is not difficult.

11.The easiest way is intended to make use of public transport immediately, when you take the bus or subway, carbon dioxide reduction can be more than a passenger car use

12.Then, it can be recycled was acme can reduce carbon dioxide emissions by more easily than when using environmentally friendly products, it is possible to reduce the emissions of carbon dioxide and more

13.The use of recycled product, of course, those who do not use at all, or reduce the use of disposable is good for us

14.Reducing carbon dioxide emissions is important, but planting the tree that can be made to purify the emission of carbon dioxide and is a very good way

15.It may be explained why you must plant trees if you know the fact that if you plant a single pine, and of absorbing carbon dioxide from the year about 5kg.

16.Finally, because it can reduce the 7kg annual emissions of carbon dioxide and reducing one minute shower time should be used carefully with water

17.If you lower the emissions of carbon dioxide by using the various methods described above, the earth's temperature would be lowered after entering the reduced global warming

18.There is a passing of the 바톤 a good environment to offspring if unless we reduce from current emissions of carbon dioxide

19.It should reduce carbon dioxide emissions are not only to give its descendants, in order to receive a good environment comfortable our living.

20.Good environment, is an essential element in life we all.dw