I agree to wearing casual uniform due to three reasons.

First, We are able to move comfortably.

Uniform shirts is inconvenient because fit into our bodies.

However, the casual uniform have space to spare. So it is comfortable.

Second, we have feel fresh in school since clothes is ventilated well. In other words, we are not shed a lot of sweat.

And then when drying the laundry to dried well.

 

여기까지 했는데... 접속사 부분이랑 to dried 이 부분이 제일 신경 쓰여서요. ㅠ.ㅠ

so랑 because 같은 부분을 쓸 때, 문장을 끝내고나서 써야하는지 아니면 끝내지 않고 그대로 이어서 쓰는지도 너무 궁금해요. ㅠ.ㅠ