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Nice to meet you sir.
First I want to explain that why I desire entrance into Changwon polytechnic.
I'm working at textile factory.
From direct experiences in the field, I felt many things.
Low salary,hard working it really makes me dissapointed.
So I decided to  find another job.
I was wonder that how can I find a better job?
What should I do?
The answer was improve the value of on my own.
What can i do to improve my value?
After Struggling, I think that I have to go college to improve my value.
So I decide entrance into Changwon polytech.
That's it thank you.