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영어를 잘 못하는 상태에서 영어 작문을 하려하니 많이 어색하고, 힘드네요.. 

1.How the coffee come to us?

a lot of coffee consumed by people. so How the coffee come to us?

it's ass the three process. first in the Brazil and Ethiopia... produce the coffee in the farm. second , company or broker buy that. third company made product. this is spend at coffee shop or mark

2. coffee of corea

in the corea, coffee is very famous brink. many people have been drinking the coffee. some company survey about coffee response. so we know that many people spend thir time in the coffee shop then bar. and we can know that coffee shop is more comfortable.

3. there isn't coffee in the africa

Do you know that? in the africa, there isn't coffee. actually africa call the coffee like buna. the name of coffee come from caffa. caffa is name of Ethiopia kingdom

4. coffee can help the parkinson's disease prevention
and it's lower the woman melancholia

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