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Topic: My favorite time of the day is after exercising in the gym
I feel really relaxed and happy after exercising in the gym. After exercising in the gym, i am litte bit
tired but this feeling makes me proud because i exercised myself well in the gym. It is usually
cold when i go outside from the building because of the low temperature and strong wind, but
because my body is warm i am not cold even in this chill weather. After getting into the bus, i feel
comfortable and little bit sleepy. My muscles are shrinked but my mind becomes relaxed so it
feels like covering my body with a quilts with windows opened. Also, it is interesting for me to think
what i am going to do at home while i am in the bus. Finally, this time of the day is like if i am in a
sauna and i feel proud of myself since i have done things i should do everyday and it's good time
to recall what i have done on that day.
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